General Poetry posted November 2, 2025


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One of my favourite Janis Joplin songs.

Little Girl Blue

by tempeste

 
She poured out her pain
and captured the people's hearts,
this "little girl blue"
 



Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Senru. A poem that follows the five, seven, and five syllable count (5, 7, 5). 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.


If you listen to how much emotion Joplin sings the song, it feels she is identifing herself with the little girl in the song.
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